Survey

 

During our learning on Mountains in geography, we learnt about mountain expeditions.

We then transfered our knowledge to our writing, producing exciting and dramatic recounts of an expedition.

My trip to Mount Everest

 

A recount by Hiral, inspired by the ‘Beckoning Silence’ and ‘Into Thin Air’.

 

As I clipped into a fixed rope and prepared to rappel over the lip, I was greeted with an alarming sight: an avalanche hurtling towards me. I was dreading, dreading my destiny. As rapidly as I could, I lowered myself gently, going in a horizontal direction. It was an insurmountable hurdle that I needed to overcome. In relief, my half-tired, half-dreading body managed to escape from the rush of snow.

  Sighing, I began to my descent. The icy cold wind blew across my face violently; it was freezing cold. The largest mountain in the world and I was climbing it…

  Suddenly, the sight of a crevasse hit me. Puzzled, my mind span around in gigantic circles, adding to my altitude sickness. It was as if a giant was reaching out to grab me: I felt alarmed and the ice was cracking. However, my best mate was there to help me. I was thinking that as long as my companion was by my side, I would be fine. But I was wrong. Without warning, my friend cut the rope. I fell. I fell helplessly into the crevasse.

Luckily, my companion came and the cracking stopped. My heart was beating furiously, beating against my ice-cold chest.

  Cold. Nothing but cold. This was the end of our lives: a storm. I shouted as loud as I could, but no-one answered me. I felt petrified.

 

By Hiral, age 11 years

 

 

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